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I am me
A beautiful nothing
        ....hidden
Behind a mask
That has been created by others

I am light
Shining for all
          ....but darkened
By a hand
Shutting me out from the world

I am love
A caring heart
          ....beating
For you
Even if you do not reach back
©2005-2009 ~abitwierd
:iconabitwierd:

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i wrote this a few weeks ago, nothing special. not sure if i like it, i think i have better, read some of those....

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:iconjuliev6:
oo la la. Very good. made me feel something way down inside.. like.. almost in your chest- but faaarr back.. in a place that's untouchable. I'm not sure why I told you that--- maybe because it's true.

I really like it- it's very origional.. and very truthful- I can relate. :)

great. :hug:

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:iconabitwierd:
thanks julie!!

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The suspense is killing me. I hope it lasts. ~ Willy Wonka

love, sara :teddy:
:iconcluelessrockerchik:
I like this a lot, but is so sad! I will reach back sara! I love you! :) Ok, we should get together, I know you have school but.. psh tsh. I should come see you sometime this week. Oh well.

I like the poem, very nice, you're a good writer :) ! :hug: have a good day!

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:blowkiss: Spread the motherfucking love :heart:

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